I ache for something
what could it possibly be
I have so much
but I ache
still
there in my soul
a pinch
reaches out for my heart
straight up to the brain
then
out it spills
landing
here
the ache
it’s still there
in here
these words didn’t do it either
guess I’ll have to try again
tomorrow…
anntogether 
This is great I know. That feeling…..
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Ah, “that feeling,” Lynne – it is a haunting one. Thank you
annmarie:)
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Beautiful writing AnnMarie and awesome drawing! AnnMarie= Number One! A BIG WOO HOO for the greatest of all time!
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Hoo woo – I’m speaking backwards this evening;)
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AnnMarie is so awesome she can speak backwards. Is there anything AnnMarie can’t do? AnnMarie is the greatest friend ever!
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Just as long as I done start speaking in tongues;)
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Yea we wouldn’t want that. I was thinking of AnnMarie as a Superhero flying in the air!
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😉
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big smile back at AnnMarie damn emojis how to do you work this contraption
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lol, I can’t do the emoji thing either, Dan
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Yea I don’t understand how to work this thing I want the biggest smile for AnnMarie. So many choices. AnnMarie is such a special person!
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As are you 🙂
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Thanks AnnMarie that means a lot coming from the greatest woman ever. The new book is coming along great wrote a new song for it. The song is 6 pgs long. ‘Our Rita B’ a classic. I hope Rita likes it.
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Gosh darn, AM — your batting average is .350 (Bob tells me that is a near-impossible average, but I would up it even higher if you’d believe me). I mean, everything you write is stellar. This is pure Roselli-Kissackian, so lovely in its “seemingly” simple (not necessarily so, not at all) purity. I could write an explication on how this poem hits at the heart of that all-too-human emotion of longing (your main theme, btw) but I’ll just say more to the point: This is absolutely beautiful, a poetic gem that outshines the Hope diamond (and I’ve seen that big rock in person, so I know). 😉
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lol
remember now, you’re giving out batting averages to a gal who batted at the #4 spot varsity softball –
DS – way too kind – your words shine bright
humble thanks
am:)
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Oh, damn! My bad! I was talkin’ “baseball,” not “softball.” 😉 After checking with my softball-playin’ husband I have been informed that I should have made your average AT LEAST .600 — my error (that’s ball lingo, right?). 🙂
I speak the truth, always. There is no need to be humble.
Own it, Miss.
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Lol
Too kind, you are DS
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The creative ache is never satisfied. I just noticed your initials on your beautiful art piece spells ark. Interesting! 🙂
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thank you, Olga
creative and aching have a lifetime marriage
I lucked out with the initials;)
hope all is well in your world
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Thank-you, ARK. All is well, except for spring being delayed.
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Spring should always follow its name – and alight quickly:)
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🙂
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I know the feeling, but tomorrow’s another brand new bright shiny day! 💓
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hi there, Sibella
just writing your lovely name, makes me smile (determined am I to use as a character one day:)
I like bright and shiny:)
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Hi there AnnMarie, bright and shiny it will be! 🙂 Can’t wait for the “Sibella” character!!! 😁
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When I take another crack at a YA fantasy – there will romp Sibella:)
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😀
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Artwork is alive.
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Very much so – heart, soul and all 🙂
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