seven am
returning from a school drop
two older gals
walking, striding, smiling
sun
yea, it’s shining
not as brightly as these two powder-fresh sprites
their white Sketchers impossibly polished
like their well-seasoned eyes
almost see facial twinkling from my car
I’ve lowered speed
decelerating
crawling my Ford tires
slow the rushing axles
beaming at these living cherubs
while I sing along with Sirius ’70’s
wouldn’t you know
you sexy thing
starts playing
too freakin’ perfect
exuberant I’ve grown while observing these fine ladies
damn, still buckled in
I wanna get out and dance
run, sprint
stride step with these great smiling ladies
I picture them shakin’
moving their tried and true derriéres like they were 25
and in their minds, they still are
easy to deduce by their meandering glitter trail
I bet these 2 beauties were live wires
the kind that stretched and sprang back
knocking all them young lads for a loop
and a tongue tie
with their bedazzling smiles
and fine fighting features
you go girls!
you sexy things!
even more perfect ’cause I love hot chocolate especially after wine;)
anntogether 
Good morning AnnMarie! How are you today? I feel great yesterday I thought my book needed some work I had too many characters with not enough to do and it turned into a run of a mill slasher but I turned it into a great book with a great story when his father reveals to him hes not his real father and Scratch the killer that snapped and killed everyone years ago that the parents and police killed for justice together so he wouldn’t get off in a trial the stepfather reveals it was his mistake to let that happen and its like Friday the 13th instead of the mother being the killer it was the real father. The real father snapped because the wife after the affair would not marry him so he couldn’t have a child of his own which made him snap as he was a kind guy and loved all his elementary students children the big mystery left is who is the killer? There are suspects but if I were you I’d read the last few chapters you are in for a big surprise that will make the book a classic. AnnMarie=Number One! woo hoo!
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that is some story you’ve got brewing there, Dan
a real thriller – horror, mayhem, love-scorn, fear…
woo hoo!
am:)
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Thanks AnnMarie I can’t wait to tell you about the ending when I finish it you will love it!
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I’m sure I will:)
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I am almost done right now. I have got to the end. This will be great. I am so excited.
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🙂
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I Love The AnnMarie! Riding a High tonight Celtics going to make big trades in the draft tonight and turn into a great team again. Only under 5 hrs away I am pumped for big deals to be done! woo hoo
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lol
all I see in these celebrations are more shopping trips for my giant son who will wish for more hip socks;)
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Woo hoo man life is good. I am so happy about this horror book it turned out to be just as good as the last one. The other one was more scary but this one has the better story. Even AnnMarie is in the book as a bookstore owner! I think this one might be better but they are both written differently one objective for one book was just to make it the scariest the other book’s object be a good slasher with a great story i more than met the expectations. i am going to keep writing horror books. summer of horror. ill let u know when i post the new video this weekend there will be A BIG SHOUT OUT AND WOO HOO for AnnMarie!
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and I do want to own a bookstore or at least pretend I do;)
congrats and keep going, Dan
your enthusiasm is palpable
woo hoo for you!
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Well this was an amazing horror book with twists and turns chills and thrills taking a brief break and doing another horror book next. Thanks and also a woo hoo for AnnMarie the greatest artist ever and the prettiest woman ever! woo hoo
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Thanks for the nostalgic jolt. I’m old enough to remember this one. Isn’t it interesting how restrained performers from that time period were?
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your welcome
I had the very same thought, Robert. I kept waiting for the lead singer’s dance sway to speed up. Restrained – hmm, both good and bad. But I generally prefer the no crotch-grabbing entertainers. (I do have a soft spot for Michael Jackson though)
am:)
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How true! In our minds we are always young.
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we have to remain young somewhere even if no one else can see it 😉
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Ok — my internet was playing havoc with me yesterday afternoon — I could swear I posted here but I think it never went through…so will do again. Different words, same sentiment as when I read this yesterday. “moving their tried and true derriéres like they were 25
and in their minds, they still are
easy to deduce by their meandering glitter trail”
Absolutely dancing while sitting down — reading this — thinkin’ bout dancing to “You Sexy Thing.” Yep – I can see these glittery ladies out speed walking, swinging their hips. You and me, babe. Dancing down the shoulder — 🙂 fun fun piece!
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lol, Lillian
you know I can’t remember (besides around the house always) the last time I went out dancing – that’s just sad, geez
there was a time I had to be ripped off the dance floor
I enjoyed writing this one – so very perfect the timing of the song and the gals striding
thank you
am:)
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In our hearts I hope we will always remain “sexy things”, even though some of us are pushing ancient and cannot imagine ever letting another man into our lives. And thank you for getting a wonderful song stuck in my elderly head for the rest of the day! – Fawn
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thank you, Fawn
I know this is like one of those pot sticker tunes – it is still stuck in m head
am:)
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